Give me an honest opinion about my poem !?

I love a poem "from the heart" as yours clearly is. what could be greater than taking the next step?...unless she is married or in a serious relationship. There is a great opportunity to bring happiness into your life . Ask yourself has she indicated an interest in you with her body language smiles etc:. For all you know she may be dying for you to ask her out. The choice is yours and deeply respected however I'm just a romantic at heart and wish you all the best.