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It was the year 1910 when the Mexican revolution began. The people who cultivated and worked the soil of Mexico were tired of the harsh conditions they where being forced to live in. Soon enough the revolution began, in an attempt to overthrow the President of M�xico Porfirio Diaz. The revolutionist who participated directly in the battlefield where mainly men, although woman isted the men physically and emotionally they where denied the ability to express themselves in anyway in regards to the revolution. Unlike the Mexican Revolutionist of the early nineteen hundreds, the Zapatistas of Chiapas have progressed as a movement by allowing woman to have the same opportunity as men do. Clearly, women have contributed greatly to the success of the Ejercito Zapatista De Liberacion Nacional (EZLN) by expressing their intelligence of social and political views. More over, women have helped the Zapatista movement by taking the roles as important leaders within the army and for the first time